Your presentation was very appealing in both writing and presentation. The text used appropriate and accurate terminology and was appropriate to age group. The idea was a brilliant and unique idea and am looking forward to seeing the finished product. One thing you could improve on is to make different titles for different article, so instead of putting Inquiring and Analysis for many documents, it would be better if you added different titles to avoid confusion, another improvement is to either highlighting everything in one color rather than highlighting paragraphs in different paragraphs, other than that the project was AMAZING. Good luck!
Tuesday, 26 January 2016
Peer Evaluation- Evaluated by Racha
Your presentation was very appealing in both writing and presentation. The text used appropriate and accurate terminology and was appropriate to age group. The idea was a brilliant and unique idea and am looking forward to seeing the finished product. One thing you could improve on is to make different titles for different article, so instead of putting Inquiring and Analysis for many documents, it would be better if you added different titles to avoid confusion, another improvement is to either highlighting everything in one color rather than highlighting paragraphs in different paragraphs, other than that the project was AMAZING. Good luck!
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